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Script P.I.M.P. is dedicated to helping writers
maximize the potential of their material and ultimately having their scripts
optioned, sold and produced.
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Thanks for the Script P.I.M.P recommend my script "Catching Hell"
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-Christina Hazelwood (February, 2004)
"Hello,
I'd just like to thank the reader of my screenplay, F.B.R. I found the
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in the future. Sincerely,"
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incase no one ever says thanks."
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in providing enthusiasm to do a rewrite based upon the feedback... One
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"Hi Laina,
Sean was an enormously thorough and dedicated Evaluator. His investment
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- even offering to forward it on to certain industry contacts after I
complete a polish. How rewarding for me that someone could be so engaged
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However, the comments / suggestions were presented in such a way as to
be encouraging not degrading which helped in providing enthusiasm to do
a rewrite based upon the feedback.
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and for that I am grateful."
-Paul Bruno (January, 2004)
"Dear Laina, Can you please thank Sean on my behalf for his helpful
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great team.cheers,"
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Since I signed up for a review only, I wasnt expecting the notes, but
I do appreciate the feedback.
It definitely gives me something to think about. Just wanted to thank
you and let you know the feedback was appreciated. With Regards"
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