| 188+ stage Hero’s Journey |
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United Kingdom
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(UK) 077100 780368
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kal@clickok.co.uk |
| Website |
http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html |
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The Hero's Journey pattern (also known as the Monomyth) is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. Our detailed deconstruction of hundreds of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters has revealed more than 188 stages of the Hero's Journey that you need to know about. Nobody strays too far from it - not Scorsese, not Coppola, not Spielberg, not Tarantino, not Cameron. NOBODY. |
| Success Stories |
Success stories: http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html |
| Brief Bio |
Kal Bashir is the author of the 188+ stage Hero’s Journey, which is kept up to date at his website. |
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Cost: $500. Email for turnaround time (depends on whether engaged on other assignments or not; first come first served). Do not underestimate how time consuming this is for us; it takes a while to read your screenplay multiple times, then time is required to allow your story to incubate in our minds and then feedback, often page by page, must be written. |
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Jon Nalick
1975 Zonal Ave., KAM 4000
Los Angeles,
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90033
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j.nalick@verizon.net |
| Website |
http://home1.gte.net/res09dkv/ays/ |
| Coverage |
$200 |
| Turnaround |
Usually 3 days or less. |
| Brief Bio |
Jon Nalick was educated at USC in screenwriting and script analysis. He has worked for the L. A. Times as a reporter and writes screenplays. |
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| Act One: APEX Script Critique |
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| Address |
2690 N. Beachwood Dr., 1st Floor
Hollywood,
CA
90028
USA
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| Phone |
323-462-1348
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| Fax |
323-462-3199 |
| Email |
info@actoneprogram.com |
| Website |
http://www.actoneprogram.com |
| Coverage |
$185 |
| Turnaround |
4 to 8 weeks |
| Brief Bio |
Script analysis with a Christian bent. |
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| Alan A. Armer |
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nala456@aol.com |
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Alan A. Armer has directed or produced over 350 tv movies and series episodes. He has taught for 18 years and is the author of two books. |
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| Aubrey M. Horton |
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ScriptDoctor911.com
P.O. Box 200459
Austin,
TX
78720
USA
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info@scriptdoctor911.com |
| Website |
http://www.scriptdoctor911.com |
| Coverage |
evaluation fee -> $38
doctoring fee -> $326 to $520 |
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Aubrey M. Horton has doctored scripts for five screenwriters who've won national competitions. In 1999, a screenwriter (who has had several scripts doctored by Horton) wrote a project which won a Golden Globe nomination. |
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| Ben Dubner |
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84 Marcus Avenue
New Hyde Park,
NY
11040
USA
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516-746-5959
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florben1@aol.com |
| Coverage |
"Copy of Creative Screenwriting Magazine
report in which he is "Recommended", available upon request. 8 weeks of unlimited email consultation included for $295.00. Regular fee $395." |
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| Bettina Moss & Winship Cook |
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P.O. Box 26883
Los Angeles,
CA
90026
USA
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323.337.2016
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bettina@screenplayhelp.com, winship@screenplayhelp.com |
| Website |
http://www.screenplayhelp.com/index2.html |
| Turnaround |
OPTION ONE: $450
2-3 Week Turnaround**
OPTION TWO: $600
1 Week Turnaround
OPTION THREE: $750
Weekend Turnaround |
| Brief Bio |
Bettina Moss was head of the story department for HBO Films and Series during the production of such Emmy winners and Oscar nominees as
Angels In America, Something The Lord Made, American Splendor, Maria Full Of Grace, The Sopranos, Six Feet Under and Deadwood.
Winship Cook most recently was Vice President, Development and a Producer with The Edward S. Feldman Company. |
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| Bill Johnson |
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| Address |
318 S.W. Palatine Hill Rd.
Portland,
OR
97219
USA
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503-452-4778
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bjscript@teleport.com |
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blankslatesc@aol.com |
| Coverage |
$400
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| Rewrite |
$250 |
| Turnaround |
14 days |
| Brief Bio |
Jacqueline Dollard worked as a story editor for New Regency Productions as well as for John Wells(executive producer of WEST WING and ER). |
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This is not a standard script coverage service but a detailed analysis of the script and ensuing notes averaging about 20 pages. Ideal for writers looking to improve upon their material |
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| Brass Brad, The |
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| Address |
30845 Avenida Del Reposo
Temecula,
CA
92591
USA
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| Phone |
(951) 587-3890
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| Fax |
(951) 587-6350 |
| Email |
KSeilhamer@aol.com |
| Website |
http://www.brassbrad.com |
| Coverage |
$300 (up to 130pgs) -- $350 (over 130-150pgs) Analysis identifies strengths and weaknesses, with possible solutions offered to problem areas. You'll receive notes on technical presentation, structure, plot, character and dialog, plus detailed page-by-page notes highlighted throughout the script. A 30 minute phone conference answering any questions you may have is also included. In general, notes range from 6 -20 pages depending on what the script requires. |
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$225 / $275 Same services as above. (I must have consulted on a prior draft of the project within the past year.) |
| Turnaround |
2-3 weeks |
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Produced Screenwriter Kimberly Seilhamer is a Competition Judge (Writer's Digest/ASA, Hartley Merrill, & American Accolades), Project consultant for the African Film Commission, WebAuthor of THE BRASS BRAD website, and former Marine. Consults in all genres, but specializes in action, military, thriller, and horror. |
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Prices listed reflect a $50 discount on Initial Coverage services for Script P.I.M.P. members only. |
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| Camille Tucker |
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| Address |
6245 Bristol Parkway #265
Culver City,
CA
90230
USA
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| Phone |
310-433-1824
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| Fax |
310-388-0928 |
| Email |
info@pneumaentertainment.com |
| Website |
http://www.pneumaentertainment.com |
| Coverage |
$150, 300 (anything over 120 pgs. is an additional $10 per page). You'll receive development notes covering the strengths & weaknesses of your screenplay and an analysis of theme, plot, tone, structure, character, dialogue, including suggestions for structure, dialogue and scenes fixes. Notes also touch on production feasibility and marketability of the screenplay. Includes a 1/2 hour phone consultation for Q&A, development notes review and career guidance. |
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$100 (within one year of original consultation) |
| Turnaround |
2-3 weeks |
| Brief Bio |
Camille and her former partner sold four studio projects: M'LADY to SONY STUDIOS with Robert De Niro and Jane Rosenthal producing, GOLDDIGGAZ to UNIVERSAL PICTURES with John Singleton producing, THE UNDERGROUND to UNIVERSAL PICTURES, and the TV Pilot THE SODA GIRLS to FOX TV. They were hired to adapt the book HOW TO MARRY A BLACK MAN for TOUCHSTONE PICTURES, Debra Chase and Whitney Houston, producers. Camille worked as Director of Development at Humble Journey Films. |
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We also provide script doctoring services. |
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| Carolyn Neilson |
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| Address |
6404 Hollywood Blvd.
Suite 327
Los Angeles,
CA
90028
USA
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818-509-5868
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jim@jamespmercurio.com |
| Website |
http://www.jamespmercurio.com |
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>Script Consulting includes notes, hand-written comments, 30-minute phone consultation. Range of Services includes: SCRIPT ANALYSIS, (Comprehensive & Professional), TREATMENT ANALYSIS, STANDARD COVERAGE, SCRIPT COACHING,
CUSTOMIZED SERVICE. Price range is $200-$750. |
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Columnist and regular writer for "Creative Screenwriting." Ranked 5th in the country by Nancy Hendrickson in her review of 24 script consultants in Creative Screenwriting Magazine. Produced feature film, "Hard Scrambled." See full bio at http://www.jamespmercurio.com/biography.html |
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Ranked 5th in the country by Nancy Hendrickson in her review of 24 script consultants in Creative Screenwriting Magazine. |
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| Chase Scripts |
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chasemovie@aol.com |
| Website |
http://www.chasescripts.com/index.html |
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$75, $200 |
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| Chris Angell |
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| Address |
137 Camino Ruiz #156
Camarillo,
CA
93012
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805-484-0148
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cbangell@hotmail.com |
| Coverage |
Complete story and structural analysis, full notes and a
telephone consultation.
-- $200.00 up to 120 pages.
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| Turnaround |
1 week or less. |
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Recent client is to have script produced by Vivendi France. |
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Chris Angell has worked with Professional screen writers,
directors, actors and novelists for the past thirty years. After working at
MGM Studio Chris pursued story editing full time. Chris' father, Buckley
Angell wrote and sold more than 200 screenplays and Chris "grew up" in the
business and began editing for his Dad and then other writers, gaining a
strong reputation as a story editor and "Script Doctor".
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ocus is on Plot, Character development, pacing, story
structure, dialog and motivation. I want your story to be as good as it can
possibly be. After "inside" a story for a long time, all of a us can use
some "outside" eyes to spot trouble or mis-direction. Call me.
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| Chris Keane |
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| Address |
1137 Mass Ave. #43
Cambridge,
MA
02138
USA
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617-661-3976
617-283-6161
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keanewords@aol.com |
| Website |
http://www.keanewords.com/index.html |
| Coverage |
$495 (comes with Keane's book) |
| Rewrite |
$295 |
| Turnaround |
One week |
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Chris currently has a new book coming out in March that the publisher (Michael Wiese Productions) is really getting behind ROMANCING THE A-LIST: Writing the Script the Big Stars Want to Make. Look for this in stores soon! |
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WGA member Chris Keane has written screenplays for film and television along with novels and writing guides: HOW TO WRITE A SELLING SCREENPLAY + HOT PROPERTY: Screenwriting in the NEW Hollywood. Teaches at Harvard, NYU, Emerson. |
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http://www.keanewords.com/workshops.html |
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| Chris Soth's Million-Dollar Screenwriting: The Mini-Movie Method |
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CA
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http://www.milliondollarscreenwriting.com |
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CHRIS SOTH developed the “Mini-Movie Method” after years of success as a Hollywood screenwriter. Chris has multiple projects in development at major Hollywood studios. This master story teller is also an expert in pitching and selling - necessary tools for a screenwriter in Hollywood. Chris holds an MFA in screenwriting and a BA in Dramatic Literature. He is the only seminar instructor whose work has been produced by a major Hollywood studio. |
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CLASS MEETS: SATURDAY JUNE 4 & SUNDAY JUNE 5, 2005
LOCATION: HOLIDAY INN, HOLLYWOOD IN THE DIRECTOR'S ROOM |
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| Address |
3717 S. LaBrea Ave. #106-522
Los Angeles,
CA
90016
USA
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323-702-2989
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| Email |
coverageinfo@writingcoverage.com |
| Website |
http://www.writingcoverage.com/coverage.htm |
| Coverage |
$129 for in-depth analysis by professional, working
production company readers; $249 for two analyses of same script. Our readers are hand-picked, tested and certified by us for their smarts and helpfulness. |
| Turnaround |
2 weeks |
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Jim Fennessy and Kathleen M. Leo are both judges for the National Screenwriting Competition. |
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Rush service and script
editing/proofreading also available. We also offer phone consultations.
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| Coverscript: Lynne Pembroke |
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Los Angeles,
CA
USA
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323-953-5921
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Lynnepem@aol.com |
| Website |
http://www.coverscript.com/ |
| Coverage |
TV script up to 30 pages, $97. TV script up to 60 pages, $117. Screenplay up to 125 pages, $185. Additional phone consultation follow-up available for extra. |
| Turnaround |
7-10 working days |
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16 years as a professional, freelance script/screenplay and manuscript reader. Critiqued, provided development notes and edited scripts for an Emmy Award Winning Children's TV animation writer. Since 1990 has been working for a major TV/Film studio reading for
their prestigious writers fellowship program. Critiqued and provided development notes to several aspiring
screenwriters which eventually resulted in their screenplays being
sold by the agents for whom she worked. |
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Other services provided include: Ghostwriting, Rewriting and Adaptation. |
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| Creative Script Services |
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| Address |
4225B Colfax Avenue
Studio City,
CA
91604
USA
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| Phone |
818-754-4779
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| Fax |
818-762-8238 |
| Email |
info@thescript.com |
| Website |
http://www.thescript.com |
| Coverage |
$300
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| Rewrite |
$150 |
| Turnaround |
2 to 3 weeks |
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Kathryn Knowlton has been a story editor, producer, and agent for such companies as Columbia Pictures and CBS. |
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Creative Script Services was founded on the principle of helping writers
Break Down Hollywood's locked doors. We will read, evaluate and if we
believe it marketable will take you on as clients. We are the only script
consultant company that is also a full fledged management/Production
company. If we believe in your script we can represent it.Please take a
moment to visit our website www.thescript.com for more information
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| Dara Marks |
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| Address |
P.O. Box 103
323 E. Matilija Street, #110
Ojai,
CA
93023
USA
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| Phone |
805-640-1307
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| Email |
dara@ojai.net |
| Website |
http://daramarks.com |
| Coverage |
> Analysis for $1,500 includes 2-3 hour personal consultation, 8-10 page written analysis, written structural breakdown of your story.
> Rewrite Analysis for $900, includes 2-hour phone consultation and page notes.
> Hourly consultation $150/hour
> Analysis from staff consultants $300-1000 |
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Accepts major credit cards. |
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| Dave Trottier |
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801-492-7898
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dave@davetrottier.com |
| Coverage |
$475
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| Turnaround |
3 to 4 weeks |
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Dave Trottier has sold several screenplays, written hundreds of articles on screenwriting, and penned the top selling book, "The Screenwriters Bible." |
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| David Freeman's Beyond Structure |
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| Address |
2118 Wilshire Boulevard - #274
Santa Monica,
CA
90403
USA
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| Phone |
(866) 239-2600
(310) 394-6556
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| Email |
freeman@dfreeman.com |
| Website |
http://beyondstructure.com |
| Coverage |
$500
Offers weekend workshops in cities such as Los Angeles, New York, London, and Dallas. $350 for 2 days, 9:30am - 7:30pm, $100 fly-in discount. $50 discount for Script P.I.M.P. members (not good with any other offer). |
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Many quotes and testimonials from professional screenwriters available on the website. |
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| Deep Feed-back by Robert Flaxman |
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(310) 278-9578
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dpfback@aol.com |
| Website |
http://www.deepfeedback.com/ |
| Coverage |
Extremely in-depth screenplay consultation. |
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DEEP FEED-BACK - 2 to 4 weeks. RUSH - Within 7 days. EMERGENCY - Within 4 days (Existing clients only). DEMO - Within 10 days (Flaxman will spend up to a hour and one-half with you on your first fifteen pages.) |
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| Derek Rydall at Scriptwriter Central |
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| Address |
25852 McBean Parkway, Suite#133
Santa Clarita,
CA
91355-3705
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1-800-218-7182
661-296-4991
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| Fax |
1-800-218-7182 |
| Email |
derek@scriptwritercentral.com |
| Website |
http://www.scriptwritercentral.com |
| Coverage |
Script Coverage, Development Notes, In-Depth Analysis, Executive Analysis, Re-submission; see website for pricing. |
| Turnaround |
See website for details. |
| Success Stories |
“Derek is one of the most passionate, creative writers I’ve worked with. His ability to take a thread of an idea and spin story gold is amazing! If you want a professional, artistic, and commercial take on your material, Scriptwriter Central is the place to bring your script!”
-- Lisa Gooding, Head of Development, Capital Arts |
| Brief Bio |
The nephew of legendary film director, Don Siegel (Dirty Harry, Escape From Alcatraz, Invasion Of The Body Snatchers), Derek Rydall has been in show business most of his life. His diverse experience as an actor, screenwriter, playwright, script consultant, and script doctor give him the unique ability to understand film (and stories in general) on many levels, and allow him to give his clients that extra edge that takes their script to the next level -- the one that sells!
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Our consultants have been on staff for Fox and Disney, developed projects for Saturn, RKO, United Artists, Miramax, New Regency, Sony, WideAwake, Wildrice, Fine Line, Nicolas Cage, Jon Voight, Deepak Chopra, the creators of “Air Force One,” “Ghost,” worked one-on-one with many writers, indie producers, and executives from around the world – and more! Let me just remind you again…
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| Earth Lion Productions - My Script Needs Help! |
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| Address |
18653 Ventura Blvd.
#441
Tarzana,
CA
91316
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| Phone |
818 206-0250
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| Fax |
818 206-0250 |
| Email |
service@myscriptneedshelp.com |
| Website |
http://www.myscriptneedshelp.com |
| Coverage |
Coverage & Notes - $75 /
Script Analysis & Notes - $150 /
For Script Repair and Ghostwriting Services - Please Inquire
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| Turnaround |
1 week for coverage /
1-2 weeks for analysis |
| Success Stories |
http://www.myscriptneedshelp.com > Testimonials |
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